Answer:
Independent clause
Explanation:
Review your draft for pacing and sentence variety. Choose one sentence to revise either the pacing or sentence structure. In the space provided, list your original sentence, the revision, and an explanation of why you chose to revise that sentence. (Please put exact answer from Edmentum or Plato)
Narrative:
Rochelle sipped on her third mug of French roast with a twist of hazelnut as she waited for Marigold. She remembered that Marigold was always on time. So where was she? Rochelle picked up the yearbook that she had brought with her. Marigold, a girl with flaming red hair and large hazel eyes, was standing next to her in the photo. Even then, Marigold was a bit of a mystery to Rochelle.
Rochelle was lost in thought when someone tapped her on her shoulder. She was surprised to find that the hand belonged to a police officer. He asked her if she knew Marigold. When Rochelle said yes, he handed her a package wrapped in paper. Rochelle was confused and scared. Was something wrong with her friend? "Is she okay? I just spoke to her," Rochelle whispered.
"I’m her brother," said the officer. That’s when Rochelle noticed the same hazel eyes. "She sent something special for you."
"But where is Marigold?" cried Rochelle. The man calmed her and asked her to open the package. Rochelle unwrapped it. Inside was an envelope containing an airplane ticket to Barcelona and a note.
Rochelle didn’t know what to do. The officer smiled, turned around, and left. Rochelle read Marigold’s note and smiled. Rochelle remembered the day both of them had planned to go to Spain. The girl with the hazel eyes was making that dream come true.
Answer:
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Explanation:
Original sentence: She was surprised to find that the hand belonged to a police officer.
Revision: She was shocked to find that the cold hand had belonged to a tall police officer dressed in black, gray, and blue.
Why I chose this one: I chose this one because it didn't have enough detail in it.
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Which excerpt from “Raymond's Run” uses the narrative voice to make a judgement about a character’s behavior?
And tomorrow I’m subject to run the quarter-meter relay all by myself and come in first, second, and third. The big kids call me Mercury ‘cause I’m the swiftest thing in the neighborhood.
He can beat me to Amsterdam Avenue with me having a two-fire-hydrant head start and him running with his hands in his pockets and whistling. But that’s private information.
Or like last week when she won the spelling bee for the millionth time. “A good thing you got ‘receive’ Squeaky, ‘cause I would have got it wrong. I completely forgot about the spelling bee.” And she’ll clutch the lace on her blouse like it was some narrow escape. Oh, brother.
And on the other side of the fence is Raymond with his arms down to his side and the palms tucked up behind him, running in his very own style, and it’s the first time I ever saw that and I almost stop to watch my brother Raymond on his first run.
Answer:
C is the answer.
Explanation:
How does the narrator describe himself?
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3. Why does he like to go to the movies alone?
4. What happened to the narrator’s parents?
5. What happens to him on the way home from the movies?
What do we learn is the name of the narrator?
9. Why is Ponyboy so reluctant to tell Darry how he really feels after the incident with the Socs?
10. Why would Ponyboy want to be in a Greaser gang?
What is he attempting to find in the gang that is missing from his life?
Answer:
3. So he can get into the movie and live the movie with the actors, he loves to go to movies alone because it's more enjoyable that way.
4. When he was barely a baby, his parents had already passed away. Less than a year before the story's beginning, they were killed in a vehicle accident.
5. As he's coming home alone after seeing a movie, Ponyboy is attacked by a gang of Socs. The greasers' opposing gang lives on the west side, known as the Socs.
6. Michael Curtis's Ponyboy 14-year-old protagonist and narrator of The Outsiders. Due to an automobile tragedy, his parents have been murdered, and he now lives with his two brothers.
9. As much as Ponyboy wanted to tell Darry how he was feeling, he knew it was inappropriate. He was shivering, his chest ached, and his hands were quivering. Ponyboy was also aware that he would look like a newborn.
10. As a result of the loss of Ponyboy's parents, the gang has formed into a surrogate family for him. Although he doesn't enjoy the fighting or the bloodshed, he feels the burden of strain from Darry, and thus his group is there for him.
Which of these sentences has the best word order for clearest meaning?
A.A man rode with a redshirt the horse.
B.A man rode the horse in a redshirt.
C.A man with a red shirt rode the horse.
Which of these sentences has the best word order for clearest meaning?
A.A boy wearing a green cap ate a hot dog.
B.A boy ate wearing a green cap a hot dog.
C.A boy ate a hot dog wearing a green cap.
Basketball is very fun for Martha and Geraldo.
basketball
Martha and Geraldo
fun
What is the complete subject of the sentence below?
Running as fast as she could, Lorna crossed the finish line.
Running
Lorna
finish line
she
Select the complete predicate from the sentence below.
Lindsay enjoys surfing with her friends.
enjoys surfing
surfing with her friends
Lindsay enjoys surfing
Lindsay enjoys
enjoys surfing with her friends
Answer:
1:C.A man with a red shirt rode the horse.
2:C.A boy ate a hot dog wearing a green cap
in the open window what is Framton thoughts
Answer:
In "The Open Window," Framton Nuttel can be considered somewhat self-absorbed. Framton, on the advice of his doctors, is seeking peace and quiet to calm his fragile nerves. His sister provides him with letters of introduction, one of which he plans to give to Mrs. Sappleton
Explanation:
